When in night I see the stars,
their light seems to vanish the dark,
but i feel a scare in my heart
I don't know what triggers this fear...
When i see the sun in morn
its scorching heat falls on my palms
and it seems my throbbing heart would never calm.
I dont know what triggers this fear...
When in cold winter days
the wind blows over my face
i feel the chill
as if the wind is going to kill.
i dont know what triggers this fear...
When in hot summer days,
the loo hovers like a ghost
i feel that its hot trap would engulf my soul
i don't know what triggers this fear...
My dolorous heart, my sickening fear
for the day is near
when i would be killed by fear!
7 comments:
Hi Nikita
Very nice poem, keep up the good work. I wish you all the best in your furure endeavors.
I appreciate the style of wriring and even more the idea behind the poem . You evaded making the poem gothic even with fear all over it , something i will really work on.Keep this blog breathing ... plz.
Heyy!!
g888 work!!I think u r taking ur course seriously!Really a fine piece of work!
thanks for your comments...I was browsing and it was by accident that I happened to browse thru ur blog posts (glad I did) Btw, this poem is thematically very strong...keep it up... :)
hmmm... life is all about overcoming those fears... making them ur strengh and not ur weakness...and moving on...
keep going.. :)
Seasons frighten you I suppose. :D
Anyways, wonderfully written. :)
- Madhav
@madhav- :D nah nothing of the sort.. was just feeling eerie d day i wrote this ;)
n thx :)
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